Feedback On My Work-In-Progress Please?

[Blaze]

Okay not work-in-progress map but story, par-say. I want to know what you guys think about my new story and give me some tips to improve the maps/story itself, or just tell me what you liked and didn't like.

Link: http://knucklecracker.com/creeperworld/mapcomments.php?id=458&page= Intro

Link: http://knucklecracker.com/creeperworld/mapcomments.php?id=882&page= Episode One

Stuck on idea for Episode Two.

I plan on making two seasons with 20 episodes each. But I might not. Anyways just want some feedback.

P.S My first topic!

[mothwentbad]

Hmmmm. 20 is a lot. It depends. Maybe you should do 20, and then trim it down to several of the best?

[Blaze]

Yeah thats what I thought so I said maybe i wont. But I did not think of that! I'll try that... Thank you for the idea.