Custom Map #4147: Andromeda's campaign day 19 - First line of defence. By: KIKI443

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Author: KIKI443
Size: 128x128

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The war against creepers seem to be over and you are returning from 18 day long campaign back to Earth. on your way back you will come across an unpleasent and unexpected suprisse.

[Johnny Haywire]

Thanks for the map, KIKI! It's definitely a different kind of map.... I can't say I remember playing anything quite like it. I enjoyed reading a bit of the storyline behind the mission, although I felt it was a bit too long, especially considering how short the mission itself is. The translation from your native language into English was a little rough at times but all things considered it was well done! (You even got "your" and "you're" correct, which many native speakers can't seem to do!)

As for actually doing the mission - The only weapons you'll need are to clear the creeper in front of your base. You should be able to kill all the spore towers before they fire.

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Use the powerzones and upgrade build speed (mostly) and packet speed (a little). A collector in a PZ has the same range as a nullifier, so once you use the PZ for a nullifier, replace it with a collector and then just build your next nullifiers. Rinse & repeat.

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Thanks again for the nice storyboard-map!  :D

[kiki443]

First, Thanks for feedback for the map it is much appreciated.
About the strory I am glad that you liked it, My suggestion is that you should play earlier maps from "Andromeda's campaign" collection,
and find out what happens before this story "Day 19 - First Line of Defence" is sequel of "Day 18 the Citadel" which is sequel of "Day 17 - Capital Intruders". bassiclly every map from "Andromeda's Campaign"  collection is either a prequel or a sequel to earlier or later map.
So if you want to read the entire story you should play earlier maps., they all have "Andromeda's Campaign" in the tittle.
There are some maps from "warfare" collection but they are single missions they are not connected to the story of "Andromeda's Campaign".

you may leave your feedback for those maps too, here on forums I would really like to hear it.

here is the list of maps you should check out:

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Custom Map #825: andromeda's campaign day 1. By: kiki443
Custom Map #830: andromeda's campaign day 2. By: kiki443
Custom Map #835: andromeda's campaign day 3. By: kiki443
Custom Map #843: andromeda's campaign day 4. By: kiki443
Custom Map #851: andromeda's campaign day 5. By: kiki443
Custom Map #857: andromeda's campaign day 6. By: kiki443
Custom Map #947: ANDROMEDA'S CAMPAIGN DAY 7 (the army camp). By: kiki443
Custom Map #951: andromeda's campaign day 8 (allied landing zone). By: kiki443
Custom Map #956: andromeda's campaign day 9 (tree of war). By: kiki443
Custom Map #961: andromeda's campaign day 10 (the missille complex). By: kiki443
Custom Map #969: andromeda's campaign day 11 (Orion shipyard). By: kiki443
Custom Map #975: andromeda's campaign day 12 (liberation base). By: kiki443
Custom Map #1532: andromeda's campaign day 13 - cetus village. By: kiki443
Custom Map #1542: andromeda's campaign day 14 forward base. By: kiki443
Custom Map #2124: andromeda's campaign day 15 - resource convoy. By: kiki443
Custom Map #2126: andromeda's campaign day 16 - the ION cannons. By: kiki443
Custom Map #3937: Andromeda's campaign day 17 (Capital Intruders). By: KIKI443
Custom Map #3943: Andromeda's Campaign day 18 - The Citadel. By: KIKI443

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although I felt it was a bit too long, especially considering how short the mission itself is

agreed, even I felt it was little too long for a short story, but it is a dialog so it is normall to be a little longer then usuall story.
as for the mission it was supposed to be short and too easy since it wasn't a real attack, you will see the reason for that in next mission:
"Andromeda's Campaign Day 20" btw it will be relased in about 2-5 days it is still in final development.

The translation from your native language into English was a little rough at times but all things considered it was well done! (You even got "your" and "you're" correct, which many native speakers can't seem to do!)

Thanks for that I must admit that english is not my native language I am from Croatia and Croatian language is far different then english,
but I am doing my best to write the story on english and put some advanced complex phrases.
btw sorry for any grammar mistakes on either my story in maps or on this forum.

Thanks again for the nice storyboard-map

You're welcome, thanks for your feedback.,
And once again Try playing the maps I mentioned in a spoiler before to find out what happened in the story before this mission.
I will appreciate any feedback on those missions even the negative ones (like Criticism or Bug repots etc.)

Thanks once again

[Johnny Haywire]

Ah, so it's part of a much larger storyline - well in that case the long dialogue makes sense then! And don't worry about the grammar - it's definitely readable!

No worries, mate - you're doing an excellent job... keep it up!  ;D