Story mode typos

[Ceraus]

I can't recall where, but I had seen a thread where it was mentioned that typos should be reported. So I jotted them down when I noticed any.

There are a couple places where ellipses (...) have more than 3 dots. Unless the whole style supports this (see Phoenix Wright), it's not justified.

A couple random ones, in no particulate order. A search should reveal them wherever they're stored. Sometimes the typos are obvious isolated this way, sometimes I have a couple notes accompanying them, sometimes I don't recall what the problem was.

• run some calculation first
• The question is why are they -> The question is: why are they
• surrounded by ever increasing particulate -> ever-increasing
• But, something else -> no comma
• the first empire -> the First Empire? Is it a title, like the First World War?
• redacted space -> Redacted Space; sometimes the capitals are missing
• and the signature we found that is evidence of the origin world, all adds up
• The Abraxian cache was was
• She secretly encoded a message before she disappeared that I discovered once I came of age. -> (somewhat clunky, may be rephrased as:) Once I came of age, I discovered a message she had secretly encoded before she disappeared.
• I don't see an GalCorp officers around here
• of being manufactured -> of having been manufactured
• helheim -> Helheim)

There are also a lot of missing commas. Some might be argued, but I'd add one in each of the following instances:

• Thoth what is your assessment
• With more readings perhaps
• I can see it Danu, we all can
• Let's get to it crew
• Let me Kami
• Kami, once you are composed please integrate
• For now we have a fight
• From the scans it seems possible
• Steady Ogun...
• if it's made out of Particulate our weapons
• That it should sir
• its mission objective only to
• so that my friend isn't true anymore
• Sign me up sir
• our whole lives Dagr Ticon
• And you old friend?
• near these coordinates, but no longer in this system and transmit!
• Yes, clearly events

Hope this helps!