This topic is for discussion of map #174: CON Landing Site Mission1
(http://knucklecracker.com/particlefleet/queryMaps.php?query=thumbnailid&id=174)
Author: Grynn
Size: 300x300
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Hello Varro. U are the last Survivor from the Ceo Corp. I gonna aktivate your Cryo so start help the Arc KI. Good luck.
Very fun map, if a little too easy. Way too much energy to go around, especially with all of the land you can mire.
The map itself was decently fun. Not hard, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It looked nice and played well. However, I couldn't read any of your story text simply because the spelling and grammar were quite bad. It made it so I couldn't focus on what you were trying to say because all I could see were the mistakes. If you want people to follow a story I'd strongly encourage you to type the text in Microsoft Word (or some other program that will check spelling and grammar) and then copy them into the map.
Quote from: mzimmer74 on October 16, 2016, 01:36:48 PM
The map itself was decently fun. Not hard, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It looked nice and played well. However, I couldn't read any of your story text simply because the spelling and grammar were quite bad. It made it so I couldn't focus on what you were trying to say because all I could see were the mistakes. If you want people to follow a story I'd strongly encourage you to type the text in Microsoft Word (or some other program that will check spelling and grammar) and then copy them into the map.
From the looks of his writing I would hazard a guess that English is not his first language and thus putting it in Word might help with some spelling it won't help very much with word placement. He might be better served by using google translate instead