This topic is for discussion of map: Artha 1 - The Storm (http://knucklecracker.com/creeperworld/mapcomments.php?id=910)
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Author: mpl (http://knucklecracker.com/creeperworld/viewmaps.php?author=mpl)
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Artha is 7 map (+1 bonus) series with a storyline. I recommend playing these in correct order to follow the story.
Just finished the first part, your story could use a few tweaks here and there, just minor re-wording to help it sound more professional, but otherwise this seems solid and like an enjoy able storyline.