This topic is for discussion of map #901: Red Ore Industires - Snow-Fall
(http://knucklecracker.com/creeperworld3/queryMaps.php?query=thumbnailid&id=901)
Author: RandomBB
Size: 128x128
Desc:
Hello! This is my second map of my series "Red Ore Industries". The first is Red Ore Industries - Clean Up. You can play this one first if you wish, though following the story line is adviced! ^^ Anyhow, i hope you enjoy this map, and remember to comment on how to improv and so on! ;) BB out!
BB - great map, but you have to clean up the language.
Basic rule around here is that it must be age-appropriate for about a 10 year old.
Please modify your scripts and re-submit.
H
PS - serious about the level of map. Good concept and a fun start - and a real story line working. Nice.
Thank you! The words have ben changed into more child appropiate text ^^
And im glad you like it! If you have any other ideas, or comments im more than happy to hear =)
Same as Mod, you need to tone down the language.
Other than that though was a really enjoyable map. The start was a lot more difficult than your first map, and I was glad to see when the Bertha got destroyed you get the tech for it - as I never would have made it over there in time otherwise.
Thank you! Im glad to hear you liked it ^^ Now... as a newbie to making maps... ive noticed i got a fixed version and the old snow-fall xD Is there a way for me to delete the old one?
Do mind the f-bombs and such for any future maps...
But, sweet map!
Quote from: RandomBB on July 23, 2014, 12:07:32 PM
... ive noticed i got a fixed version and the old snow-fall xD
I started playing your new version and found the same language in the first script that opened (top, center).
H