I can't recall where, but I had seen a thread where it was mentioned that typos should be reported. So I jotted them down when I noticed any.
There are a couple places where ellipses (...) have more than 3 dots. Unless the whole style supports this (see Phoenix Wright), it's not justified.
A couple random ones, in no particulate order. A search should reveal them wherever they're stored. Sometimes the typos are obvious isolated this way, sometimes I have a couple notes accompanying them, sometimes I don't recall what the problem was.
- run some calculation first
- The question is why are they -> The question is: why are they
- surrounded by ever increasing particulate -> ever-increasing
- But, something else -> no comma
- the first empire -> the First Empire? Is it a title, like the First World War?
- redacted space -> Redacted Space; sometimes the capitals are missing
- and the signature we found that is evidence of the origin world, all adds up
- The Abraxian cache was was
- She secretly encoded a message before she disappeared that I discovered once I came of age. -> (somewhat clunky, may be rephrased as:) Once I came of age, I discovered a message she had secretly encoded before she disappeared.
- I don't see an GalCorp officers around here
- of being manufactured -> of having been manufactured
- helheim -> Helheim)
There are also a lot of missing commas. Some might be argued, but I'd add one in each of the following instances:
- Thoth what is your assessment
- With more readings perhaps
- I can see it Danu, we all can
- Let's get to it crew
- Let me Kami
- Kami, once you are composed please integrate
- For now we have a fight
- From the scans it seems possible
- Steady Ogun...
- if it's made out of Particulate our weapons
- That it should sir
- its mission objective only to
- so that my friend isn't true anymore
- Sign me up sir
- our whole lives Dagr Ticon
- And you old friend?
- near these coordinates, but no longer in this system and transmit!
- Yes, clearly events
Hope this helps!